【摘要】：正作文之高意為先。王夫之在《姜齋詩話》中說:"無論詩歌與長行文字,俱以意為主,意猶帥也。無帥之兵,謂之烏合。"的確,沒有好的立意,文字雖然有生命,但卻沒有靈魂。而很多學(xué)生在寫作時往往跟著感覺走,想到什么寫什么,哪里還想到要精心選材、深刻立意、巧妙構(gòu)思?有鑒于此,我設(shè)計了一次作業(yè),統(tǒng)一觀察身邊的人物——"賣魚的女孩",并自主立意寫一篇記敘文。絕大部分同學(xué)的作文立意為體現(xiàn)女孩的勤勞善良,這樣的
[Abstract]:The high meaning of the correct composition is the first. Wang Fuzhi said in Jiang Zhai's Poems: "whether poetry or long lines of writing, meaning is the main body, meaning is also handsome. No handsome soldiers, called the Wu he." Indeed, without good will, words have life, but no soul. And many students often follow the feeling in writing, think of what to write what, where also think of carefully selected materials, profound ideas, ingenious ideas? In view of this, I designed an assignment to observe the characters around me, the Fish Girl, and write a narrative. Most of the students' compositions are meant to reflect the diligence and kindness of girls.
【作者單位】： 江蘇省如皋市搬經(jīng)中學(xué);
【分類號】：G634.3
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