英語四級作文模板 (800字)
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英語四級作文模板 (800 字) 英語四級作文模板 (800 字) 說回這個四級的作文題。 作文的第一段,要進行簡單描繪圖畫內容,這是必須的,也是 題 目 中 強 制 要 求 的 (a brief description of the picture)。描述的時候,只要把父子兩的對話移植到第一段,然后把父親手指垃圾桶的動作描繪一下就可以了,非常簡單。 作文的第二段,進行主旨提煉并且論述。這幅圖畫很容易看出主題,那就是做大事之前,要先做小事(一屋不掃,何以掃天下),而且題目中其實早就已經(jīng)透露了主題了 (express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.)因此,第二段通篇論述小事做起的重要性就可以了。屬于我在課堂上講過的作文三大分類之“積極主題,論述意義” 作文第三段,總結,啟發(fā)。這一段再次強調小事做起的意義,我們不能低估他的威力。文章最后可以以名人名言作為結尾。 如果是圖畫作文,一,不要忘記描繪圖畫的內容;二,提煉出圖畫里面的主旨,要么積極的向上的好事,需要我們領悟和執(zhí)行;要么是消極的負面的壞事,需要我們理性分析看待,最后給出一些看法建議。不難,別怕。主題,如果是正面文章,可以關注下 taking actions (采取行動的意義)the consciousness of innovation ( 創(chuàng)新意識) 等等; 如果是圖表作文,一、第一段描繪圖表內容,不難;二,提煉主旨和論述,這個和圖畫作文一樣。三,提出個人觀點,預測圖表趨勢,友善建議提醒都可以。 如果是引語作文,關鍵是要看出引語內含的主旨,并進行論述就可以。去年的六級出了 On maintaining trust 維持信任和 man and computer 人與電腦兩個話題,一個是抽象的,一個是現(xiàn)實具體的。那么今天下午的考試,如果是引語作文,應該也會一個是抽象話題,一個是具體現(xiàn)實話題。抽象話題,諸如“自 信、溝通、合作、樂觀、耐心、行動、夢想、創(chuàng)新”等,只 要論述其意義就可以;如果是現(xiàn)實問題,比如“大學生就業(yè)難、酒后駕駛、假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品、手機熱、環(huán)境保護”等,只要分析這些現(xiàn)象背后的原因和根源就可以了。 最后,預祝各位考生順利。 第一部分:考試分析 一:形式 1. 有圖片,圖片要點為:一對父子就一個問題展開討論; 2,英文提示:a 簡要描述圖片;b 給出有關于主題“the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”的觀點 二.寫作應對 1. 簡要描述圖片: 簡要描述,即,描述圖中主題,并引出相關的主題即可,故可以結合考研春季基礎班講義,使用描述句式如下: A:簡單型 As we can see from the picture,there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son. B:復雜型 As is vividly depicted in the picture, two men ,who are a father and his son,are talking about what should be done firstly,the small thing or the big ones.Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. 2. 判斷寫作類型: 題干中有明顯的兩種觀點,即先做小事,或者大事,只不過,出題人要求學生寫的是關于先做小事的重要的意義,,故可以使用兩種觀點對立的“觀點分型”寫作模板帶入如下: 第一段:說明現(xiàn)象 第二段:觀點討論 第三段:觀點總結 3. 主題 該主題,可以被分為三個部分,即: A : the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big B:doing small things C: doing something big 以上三個內容在每段中確保出現(xiàn) 1-2 次,該作文便不跑題。 第二部分:例文寫作與模板對比 第一段:描述圖片+說明現(xiàn)象 As we can see from the picture,there are two persons, debating about the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big, who are a father and his son. Recently, the issue of the importance of doing small things has aroused wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to do the big ones firstly, paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others. (原有模板) Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/ issue of …… has arouse wide concern among the public. Especially the young generation living in the big cities/metropolis, they tend to do sth, ignoring/paying no attention to the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their precious life and may even endanger others. 第二段:觀點討論 Does anyone claim the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely not , actually,opinions vary from person to person.Some maintain that the doing some big is beneficial to students.However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that the doing some big is detrimental to the youngsters, and they think that the merits of students ’ doing some small things far outweigh its demerits.To my way of thinking,we should know the the importance that why we must do small things before we undertake something big. If we know the significance,we will choice the right way and do the right things. (原有模板) Does anyone maintain/claim the same attitude towards this issue/phenomenon? Definitely not,actually/in fact , opinions vary from person to person.Some maintain/argue/hold/claim that something is beneficial to sth.However,quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that something is detrimental to sth .The demerits/disadvantages of sth. far outweigh its merits/advantages. 第三段:觀點總結 the problem of doing big things firstly mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if measures should be adopted before the thing get worse.What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent. It is high time that all of us ,parents,educators,and the authorities, make combined efforts to let young men know the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big .With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future (原有模板) To my way of thinking\From my perspective, The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. Measures should be adopted before things get worse.What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent.It is high time that all of us ,parents,educators,and the authorities, make combined efforts to put an end to this situation.We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over.With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future 總結:改作文中,第二段落內容容易較為單薄,故建議同學們將原模板的第三段內容中,我的觀點寫到第二段的結尾處,已調整三段之間比例。 第一段不管圖表,第一段得描述、闡述一下圖畫或圖表,就是做一個簡單的闡釋,根據(jù)圖畫和圖表進行闡釋,做個簡單的停頓。在之后做個分析,英文的分析,對圖畫上的現(xiàn)象,包括圖表的數(shù)據(jù)變化的現(xiàn)象,做一個簡單的分析,列出來。 然后在第三段的時候做一個個人總結和個人觀點的提出,其實這是不管是什么樣的形式,一定要學會這樣的方式去對待,我們常說的以不變應萬變,這個方式尤其重要 薦 我 的 數(shù) 學 老 師 (700 字 ) 作 文 薦 會 唱 歌 的 貓 (700 字 ) 作 文 薦 一 件 煩 惱 的 事 (450 字 ) 作 文 薦 冬 (400 字 ) 作 文 薦黃龍導游詞(900 字)作文
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